Tuesday, October 27, 2009
About Winter.
When I went to my jod was raining bot was snow to.I was surpryse for me bot.I like snow.
First time I saw snow
Of coerce I remember the first time I saw snow. When was walked in the street on the snow and I felt down on my back,and I was pregnant for my first child. I can't believe that happened to me. I looked right and left for I can find someone help me so I stand up I Think the winter time is crazy and all the Siusan too. When I saw it snowing on Sunday I felt this winter maybe very cold.
Editing your post and commenting on posts that others wrote
Good morning!
How are you this morning?
This morning I would like you to go back and look at your post from last week. If you did not post something, please write something to publish now. If you did write a post, I would like you to become a good reader now. Go back and read what you wrote.
Do you see any mistakes? Check your verbs. What tense did you use? Check your capital letters and punctuation. Does every sentence have a subject and a verb? Editing or correcting mistakes is a really important skill. The more you read your own writing and check for mistakes, the better you will become as a writer in English!
When you are finished making corrections and checking your work, please publish the post again (the orange button).
The next part of the class, I want you to relax and check out (read) other students' posts from our class. On the bottom of each post, you can click "Comment" to add something like a comment, question, suggestion or thought. The interaction between people is what makes blogging really fun!
How are you this morning?
This morning I would like you to go back and look at your post from last week. If you did not post something, please write something to publish now. If you did write a post, I would like you to become a good reader now. Go back and read what you wrote.
Do you see any mistakes? Check your verbs. What tense did you use? Check your capital letters and punctuation. Does every sentence have a subject and a verb? Editing or correcting mistakes is a really important skill. The more you read your own writing and check for mistakes, the better you will become as a writer in English!
When you are finished making corrections and checking your work, please publish the post again (the orange button).
The next part of the class, I want you to relax and check out (read) other students' posts from our class. On the bottom of each post, you can click "Comment" to add something like a comment, question, suggestion or thought. The interaction between people is what makes blogging really fun!
Tuesday, October 20, 2009
My first time
My first time in Boston when I saw the snow I was excited. My daugther and I went out and played with the snow like two little girls. In Boston I can to see the four seasons. I felt good when I stayed with my children and my grand children. I look out for the window screamed about the falling snow. I arrived in summer the weather was hot. But I thought the temperature was cold. For me the weather in Boston is good. I like.
my commetary is about temperature
I think the temperature in US is very crazy, this november is different of another years was early the other years. When I saw the snow I miss my family I felt sad when the trees leaves fall is depriment and different. I remember my first time when the snow fell I lived with my family was very excited, all my family together in our house that is my comentary.
My Commentary about the snow.
Hello teacher, How are you?
Yes, I do remember my first time was December 2008. When I came to U.S.A. I saw the snow was white and beautiful, I said. Because in my country it doesn't snow. Last Sunday when I saw the snow I felt homesick because I was needing to talk with my mother. I miss my life in my country and my all friends but I will be going back next year for 2 months. When I came to U.S. I said this weather is crazy but now I like the life in this country. The weather in Massachusetts it is wonderful I like the 4 seasons and thats it's.
Yes, I do remember my first time was December 2008. When I came to U.S.A. I saw the snow was white and beautiful, I said. Because in my country it doesn't snow. Last Sunday when I saw the snow I felt homesick because I was needing to talk with my mother. I miss my life in my country and my all friends but I will be going back next year for 2 months. When I came to U.S. I said this weather is crazy but now I like the life in this country. The weather in Massachusetts it is wonderful I like the 4 seasons and thats it's.
The snow tina
Good morning teacher
I read book afternoon Sunday in my home. I saw outside window in the park I disbelieve my eyes.
Outside are snow and rain. The snow is typical for season winter.I grew up my city Koch.
The winter my city is same in Boston. The snow lucky me. When I child everyday played with
snow.The Sunday I fled no good because I think school that are very long. Monday I wore the wool cl other. This is crazy seasons.The weather in Boston change every day.
I read book afternoon Sunday in my home. I saw outside window in the park I disbelieve my eyes.
Outside are snow and rain. The snow is typical for season winter.I grew up my city Koch.
The winter my city is same in Boston. The snow lucky me. When I child everyday played with
snow.The Sunday I fled no good because I think school that are very long. Monday I wore the wool cl other. This is crazy seasons.The weather in Boston change every day.
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