Tuesday, October 27, 2009

About Winter.

When I went to my jod was raining bot was snow to.I was surpryse for me bot.I like snow.

First time I saw snow

Of coerce I remember the first time I saw snow. When was walked in the street on the snow and I felt down on my back,and I was pregnant for my first child. I can't believe that happened to me. I looked right and left for I can find someone help me so I stand up I Think the winter time is crazy and all the Siusan too. When I saw it snowing on Sunday I felt this winter maybe very cold.

Editing your post and commenting on posts that others wrote

Good morning!

How are you this morning? 

This morning I would like you to go back and look at your post from last week.  If you did not post something, please write something to publish now.  If you did write a post, I would like you to become a good reader now.  Go back and read what you wrote. 

Do you see any mistakes?  Check your verbs.  What tense did you use? Check your capital letters and punctuation.  Does every sentence have a subject and a verb?  Editing or correcting mistakes is a really important skill.  The more you read your own writing and check for mistakes, the better you will become as a writer in English!

When you are finished making corrections and checking your work, please publish the post again (the orange button). 

The next part of the class, I want you to relax and check out (read) other students' posts from our class.  On the bottom of each post, you can click "Comment" to add something like a comment, question, suggestion or thought.  The interaction between people is what makes blogging really fun!

Tuesday, October 20, 2009

My first time

My first time in Boston when I saw the snow I was excited. My daugther and I went out and played with the snow like two little girls. In Boston I can to see the four seasons. I felt good when I stayed with my children and my grand children. I look out for the window screamed about the falling snow. I arrived in summer the weather was hot. But I thought the temperature was cold. For me the weather in Boston is good. I like.

my commetary is about temperature

I think the temperature in US is very crazy, this november is different of another years was early the other years. When I saw the snow I miss my family I felt sad when the trees leaves fall is depriment and different. I remember my first time when the snow fell I lived with my family was very excited, all my family together in our house that is my comentary.

My Commentary about the snow.

Hello teacher, How are you?

Yes, I do remember my first time was December 2008. When I came to U.S.A. I saw the snow was white and beautiful, I said. Because in my country it doesn't snow. Last Sunday when I saw the snow I felt homesick because I was needing to talk with my mother. I miss my life in my country and my all friends but I will be going back next year for 2 months. When I came to U.S. I said this weather is crazy but now I like the life in this country. The weather in Massachusetts it is wonderful I like the 4 seasons and thats it's.

The snow tina

Good morning teacher
I read book afternoon Sunday in my home. I saw outside window in the park I disbelieve my eyes.
Outside are snow and rain. The snow is typical for season winter.I grew up my city Koch.
The winter my city is same in Boston. The snow lucky me. When I child everyday played with
snow.The Sunday I fled no good because I think school that are very long. Monday I wore the wool cl other. This is crazy seasons.The weather in Boston change every day.

Weather in Boston

I think about the snow is beatiful, when the snow fall the streets .The winter was alittle sad.
I felt happy when I saw the snow, I remember I walked in Downtown street sunday at night.
The first time in Boston was surprise for me because in my country the climate is tropical very different.


The weather in Boston is a little crazy because every day is different, one day is cold and later is hot.

In the moment I felt sad, I was homesick my family, my country, my people, the food.

First snow of October 2009

Hello Teacher:
Yes, I remember the first time the snow. Was maravilloso waith calor nesy.I impresion the strees, the hauses, stres, cars every thing where wait calor. Cesar is 16 and Andres 11 year old.We played snow did bols and we threw, we ran. We where very happy.
Boston I like.
The Sunday snow whaw roses petalos was beatiful.
In Massachusettes the temperatua is good, it is cool bat calefaction, or hat eir condition It"s ok. In Puno did cool dow - 0 the chidren daed. Puno is a dpta. of Peru limet at Bolivia.
Bye Teacher

Elmira

My first time see snow

Well, this is my first time that i see the snow, all my life i ever think what i do when i see the snow beacuse in my country the weather is tropical, all the time is summer and it never snow fall.

I think about the snow and the winter time that is so beautiful, in this time i would like all my family near to me, because my friend told to me that in this time sometime somebody feel sad and homesick because your family is far away.

On sunday i can't saw the snow, i would like see the snow for first time, i hope get the oportunity of see when the snow falling again.

When i was came to U.S.A. i felt very stranger because i arrived on July when is summer time and i felt coold, i don't know why, but later was very very hot, how was in my country.

About the weather in MA i think is very hot only in summer time and the rest of seasons is very coold than the others state, but i like it, in summer time i like feel the hot of the days and in the winter time i like fell the breeze and the coold, is very nice...

Monday, October 19, 2009

The first snowfall of the year!!!


Good morning everyone!

Hopefully the computer lab is warm this morning.  I think it is supposed to get into the 60s today.  Can you believe it?  Sunday we had our first snowfall and today it is going to be beautiful!  Typical New England weather. 

In Vermont, where I grew up, it snows like crazy in the winter.  Right now the temperatures are in the 20s there, and we are only 3 hours away.  Here in Massachustts, it doesn't usually snow until the middle of November. On Sunday when I looked out my window and saw it snowing, I was very surprised!  I drove in the snow on Sunday afternoon.  It felt so strange.

This got me thinking about snow and growing up in the northeast.  Many of you grew up in warm, tropical climates without snow and now live in crazy New England where they say the weather can change every five minutes! 

I would like you to post your own blog this week, so others can comment on your individual blogs ...including me!  I would like us to interact more and make comments and ask questions to each other.

Do you remember the first time you saw snow?  What do you think about the snow and the winter time? How did you feel when you saw it snowing on Sunday?What was the weather like when you first arrived in the U.S.?  What do you think about the weather in Massachusetts? 

Happy writing!

Tuesday, October 13, 2009

The FALL

FOR ME SO SO BECAUSE THE THREE CHANGE THE PEOPLE FEELING SAD. IN MY COUNTRIES IS DIFFERENT.THE FOOD IMPORT IN HOLIDAY IS PUMPKIN. I GOING TO THE STREET WITH MY CHILDREN FOR CANDY AND PUMPKIN.

autuns

I like this time a little because I don't have family in Boston,for me is homesick and depress.In my country the three no change the color is different.the food pumpkin pie and flan.the Halloween sometime Igo to triptych with my children and my friends...its a good night this day its more important for a diferent children.

Monday, October 12, 2009

Autumn in New England

Hi everyone. 


I hope you all had a wonderful, long weekend!  This weekend I noticed that the temperatures are really changing and the days are becoming shorter.  It is definately fall.  I love this time of year for many reasons.  I love the cool temperatures and the nice breezes after the hot summer.  I love the foliage, the leaves changing color.  In September we start to see autumn fruits and vegetables in the stores and on the farms. There are apples, pumpkins and all kinds of squash.  Apple cider is a favorite as well.  It is a time of harvest and preparation for a long and cold winter.  Some of my favorite holidays are in the fall including Halloween and Thanksgiving.

What do you like about this time of year?  Is fall the same in your countries?  What are some typcial foods or holidays this time of year? How do you celebrate this time of year now in New England?

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